Title ~The Sexual Indoctrination Of Melissa: Book Two In The Lord Z Chronicles~
By Mangus Fitzpatrick
Publisher ~ Self Published
Published ~ July 3, 2012
My Rating ~ 3 out of 5

If you are looking for a sweet, romance story…..well, definitely don’t read this one. But, if you love those sexy, hot, erotic tales of Masters and slaves, then you definitely need to check out the Lord Z Chronicles. From start to finish of this short story, you’ll be completely hooked Melissa’s journey of submission and trust. The scenes within the story are incredibly intense and you feel Melissa’s emotions come over you like they are your own.

What I didn’t like about the story was how short it was. It’s 78 pages, and I felt that as soon as I got to really know the story, it ended. Melissa’s lessons in completely surrendering to the control of a master was well written and kept me captivated. I can’t imagine ever surrendering complete and total control, but Fitzpatrick created Melissa’s submission in such a way that it’s intriguing. Exploring a kinkier side to ones self is always intriguing to me, and that’s what Melissa did. From bondage and total unexpected encounters, Melissa’s indoctrination is definitely erotic!

I definitely suggest that you try this story if you love the more intense scenes of eroticism. Mr. Fitzpatrick definitely has a talent for creating a good series. Again, my only complaint is that they are short and leave you ready for more instantly! Looking forward to reading more of Mr. Fitzpatrick’s Lord Z Chronicles.